I liked it. Your a good story teller. Word of advice though, I'm assuming you're talking about you tube when you say "leave a like/subscribe". Might want to link to your channel.
I liked it. Your a good story teller. Word of advice though, I'm assuming you're talking about you tube when you say "leave a like/subscribe". Might want to link to your channel.
The link to my YouTube channel is on my page. But yes I should of added that to the description haha thanks for the heads up.
I was definitely impressed. The one sole thing that just really bothered me though.... was the main character pointing out her own ego.....
1. Not sexy
2. Not funny
3. Not smart
Not that its a travesty, but I just can't help but feel that this is something that the main character should not do. I mean, what's the point of everybody else in the room then ?_?
She's a talented person that's aware of her ego, what's wrong with that?
You should though....
Make it a flash series I mean. We don't usually get spriting as good as this anymore...
I understand, but it's too much work for too little results.
Work harder next time....
It's too short, and the sound is really muffled. Most good animators here will tell you that they could do what you did in an hour.....
question is, i dont know how to un muffle the sound it allways sounds good at first but turns out being crap
That was awesome!!!
YEAHH!!
That was was the best ever, really I've never seen anything better.
Thanks for the support!
I gotta give you credit....
I was skeptical during the opening, but the movie ending up being a pretty sweet watch. You recreated all the attacks nicely, and blended your animation shortcuts(as many as there might have been) considerably smoothly amidst all the action. Although, I must agree that you did put a lot of focus on visuals/effects....(i.e, flawed storyline, captions,many overdone explosions).
On a second note (maybe its just the way that style is, or maybe its just me) but if I had never familiarized myself with Chrono Trigger, and watched this movie...I'd think that Lucca, and even Flea(like she/he really is supposed to be, but that you did not mention in this movie) were simply male. Don't want to nitpick, just thought I'd mention it....
P.S. Why would you not reference DBZ? They both have the same art director.(Akira Toriyama, was it?) Anybody who complains about that should have the Delta Attack performed on them. :)
what you mean about not refrencing Z? I cleary did that all over my author comments and the flash itself.
Well now....
That's what I call brilliant sprite work and masterful voice acting.
Cheers to you all!
TAKE THAT WORLD. I got a cheer. *puts it in a locket*
Well...
If you're gonna do stick men......you may have to step your game up a notch. There's some pretty far past decent guys who also use stick figure animation here.
I know it, will definitely step up more in the next project.
Thanks for the review!
Hmmm....
I would seem that flash is most optimal for the trade...... Well done by the way, and I'm looking forward to the series.
Definately. i appreciate your support! and i have lots of ideas on how to improve already! thanks alot dude! :D:D:D
"I'm gonna say....
Step your game up, and keep this in mind for the next you submit:
The animation wasn't terrible, nor was the character design, but that doesn't mean they don't need work.
A big point: It is a technique to use voice without moving lips, however your character's mouths don't even open. It takes away from the experience.
Also, longer next time...
lol
I should have made a more notable comment on this submission that this was in no way an actual animation it is not finished, nor will it be finished the actual animation work you can find it in my home page of this site were there is a screenshot of how it is molding I did this a year ago anever finished because I was not happy with the results.
thanks anyway for the review.
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